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| my grid to be more clean and neat |
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| try on brush stroke no that happy. |
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| with out grid |
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| i make my own brush to make the ribbon feel |
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| using the grid and the brush i make very happy with it. |
I think the last time i did my monogram, i was to much on the ribbon. I try go back to my concept and think properly. My monogram does need to look like a ribbon but my concept need to be in it. I think the last presentation make me see my mono was so busy with all the swirls and colour and to much on the ribbon but i never think properly about the how i place it.
next challenge =.=
Much better! Perhaps thicker strokes to make your logo more outstanding? I love the round "a" counter.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the arm of the F can also follow ur circles movement instead of suddenly jutting out of nowhere
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